Toboe standing in the middle of the void....

[Twitchy]

Yep, a picture of Toboe from Wolf's Rain without a background. Meh, I hate the tail on hgim, it looks like it's coming out of his leg. Though I do like the pose and shading, though I think the texture isn't the greatest thing on earth. You see the chicken in the corner, my stamp, also my DeviantArt avatar. I WILL upload this onto my DA account, as I only have 1 deviation up so far.
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[glow=red,2,300]UPDATE: I would appreciate constructive criticism. I will not tolerate an opinion on this picture being merely written as "It's good." I want harsh critique too and honest opinions. Tell me the tail of poor Toboe looks like a dead rat, I don't care, I am not offended by the truth.[/glow]

[Twitchy]

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[Fire Lord Jester]

Jester: Um....Okay...o-o It will say it.....Its absolutely NOT that impressive. Its okay...but it is not impressive...It doesn't...Jump out and say...HEY, I AM AWESOME! =D

[DoodlySaph]

You want constructive criticism? Alright.. I can try, but I'm not really an expert with fanart and stuff like that. "

Okay, the drawing's good.. but not absolutely great. Don't get mad at me or anything. I just think there's something a bit.. off? I don't know what the word is. I think it might be the perspective at which it's drawn, because it doesn't really look like the hind legs are behind the front legs.. The neck sort of bothers me too, the way it's attached to the rest of the body. I don't know how to describe it..

I'm not saying it's bad! Don't get me wrong. 0.0;; I'm just saying it's not perfect, just like everything else in the world. Overall, my last comment:

It's much better than I could do.

[Amanda]

Okay, here it goes. (I must warn you, I LOVE telling the truth! *evil grin*)

The tail's a little off, and the tounge is completely wrong making the mouth look too small, but the rest is good.

[Twitchy]

Thank you all you people! It's been so long since my work was critiqued in a proper fashion! *writes down improvements I should make next time I draw*